Wednesday, April 24, 2013

Writing for Story | In Response


This book reminded me of my Dad.  At first I thought the book was too outdated and was surprised it was a part of our reading material. I thought about how journalism shifts so rapidly; advice from 1985 seems ancient.  But after Franklin told us about his childhood as the ringleader of a white gang—whaaaaat?—and I got over my initial distate for his prescriptive writing, I realized his voice sounded similar to that of my father's, who worked as a newspaper sports writer from his college and high school years in the late seventies and eventually became an investigative reporter for Kare 11 News in Minnesota. 

In high school I was drawn to journalism because of his work in the field. I liked the idea of really investigating a piece, of getting to draw out the details to make a story more tense, to get the scoop.  But as I veered toward fiction and poetry, I stuck my nose up at my dad's notes on 'integrity' and 'craft' and 'true' story-telling. 

I found myself rolling my eyes in the same way I roll them at my dad reading Franklin's advice to future writers.  But then moments of relevance continued to pop up for me.  The tension between writing as art and writing as craft is one that has always struck me, and Franklin's love of the short story kept me interested.  In "The New School for Writers" he described his love of the form that "demanded the utmost of the writer, both technically and artistically. Yet the shortness of the story—the same thing that made it so difficult—was also its saving grace" (Franklin, 22). 

I thought his diatribe about not being able to find valuable lessons in 'how to write books' books ironic as he opened the first section, but as soon as he began writing I bit my tongue. His piece "Mrs. Kelly's Monster" got me.  Not telling us whether she died  at the end, his use of the ‘pop pop pop repeating. 

1 comment:

  1. Hannah,

    I think it’s really cool that you were able to make a personal connection with the reading. I know we talked about this in class, but Franklin’s voice was certainly very strong. He definitely has a superior attitude about his voice, but I didn’t find it that upsetting since he actually knew what he was talking about!

    I actually did not look at the date when I was reading the book, so thanks for pointing out how old it is! I find it sort of heartening that these tips he is giving us are still relevant even when the world of journalism (and writing in general) are changing so much. I think, no matter how much of a jerk he is, that Franklin really does genuinely enjoy sharing his knowledge, which makes the book very readable.

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